Wednesday, August 28, 2013

Good versus Evil – Cain and Able in Writing


The Joker

Every protagonist needs an antagonist. This is fundamental to almost every form of literature and most especially the suspense/thriller/mystery genres. The historical basis for this form extends back to Homer and the classics. For the protagonist (the hero) to succeed the antagonist (anti-hero) needs to be vanquished. Good over evil, success over failure, obstacles overcome. The Bible itself is a series of short stories that advance the good (as perceived by the authors) over the evil doers of their times. And even if evil gains a temporary win, it will eventually lose. Literature shows no mercy to the faux winner.

But who is the enemy? Every age develops both their own antagonists to be put in the way of the hero and his quest. In certain times and places it was the Southern plantation owner, the Indian, the evil landowner, the cattleman, the industrialist, the communist, the capitalist, and even the society and land itself – all fighting to overwhelm and defeat the protagonist and hero. There are trends in writing based on the times. The dynamic cop/detective fighting the mob/politics in the 1920s and 1930s, Captain America and the evil Axis of Germany and Japan. Hitler and his minions, Tojo, Mussolini all were grist for writers and Hollywood during the late 1930s and into World War II itself (The Lord of the Rings). In the 1950s it was the communists yet Joseph McCarthy as the farcical enemy of communism became an antagonist himself. We had the fear of the atomic bomb which spawned mutant ants, grasshoppers, and a thing called the Blob (more than once). And who can forget The Day the Earth Stood Still (not the 2008 remake) where then enemy became us not Michael Rennie.

To say that antagonists are fashionable is an understatement. The selection of the evil doer is as much a finger on the pulse of society as it is creative fiction. Through the 60s and 70s there were dozens if not hundreds of books on the Cold War. John le Carre, Ian Fleming, novelists such as Leon Uris and Herman Wouk wrote in the era of spies and the great fear of the Soviet Union. The movie, The Manchurian Candidate, was based on Richard Condon’s 1959 novel where the great enemy was North Korea and the Soviet Union training captured American soldiers to become assassins. It was then a time of larger than life enemies and antagonists. To create a character that can instill honest fear and mortal danger to not just the hero but to a nation is worthy of our reading.

But trends can get old and even stale. Wars end, international crises pass, real enemies are defeated, and even the readers themselves get bored. And if there is one critical aspect to writing is that you never bore your reader. Even today almost every major thriller writer (Nelson DeMille, Steven Coonts, Brad Thor, John Clancy, Thomas Harris, Vince Flynn, Daniel Silva, et al) writes the same book: flawed but invincible hero (rogue American/or other westerner) confronts the evil Islamic terrorist (even worse than the governments themselves) and destroys him (unless there is the chance for a sequel). They are all well-crafted, character driven, and great reads. These writers and many others of the genre understand their audience: paranoid and fearful all wanting a savior to smite the enemy and reaffirm the Western future. I know that is a harsh statement but there is some truth to it. And it was the same truth in 1939 (pre-WWII), 1948 (Cold War), 1951 (Korea), 1962 (Cuban missile crisis), 1972 (Watergate), 1973 (Yom Kippur War), 1980s (Afghanistan/Russia), through to September 11, 2001. Every era creates real enemies and so does every writer.

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Wednesday, August 21, 2013

Elmore Leonard (1925-2013) – Ten Rules


Elmore Leonard
Next to my writing desk and within the left column of floor to ceiling shelves (five in all) in my library are two middle shelves 39 inches long. Bookending these two shelves of books on writing, editing, composition, punctuation, and a dictionary too heavy and dangerous to use, are two books, On Writing by Stephen King and 10 Rules of Writing by Elmore Leonard. The filler between these two is interesting and at times helpful. But if there is one simple and direct tome that tells a writer how best to write it’s Leonard’s 10.

Elmore Leonard died yesterday, he was 87. For those in the craft of writing he was a god-like character with all the usual Olympian foibles and charm. His craggy face and his craggy writing walked the same alleys and swamps as his characters. His shelf is almost fifty novels, all sharp tongued, witty, twisted, and crisp. He remarked that his hero, when he was young, was Hemingway, but later discovered that old Ernest hadn’t a humorous bone in his body – if there is one trait to Leonard’s work it is his humor (as dark and melancholy as it is). You know his books, and the movies, and the TV shows, I won’t list them – do this yourself. But he did leave us 10 rules, none original but succinct, to the point, and so Elmorian.

Elmore Leonard’s 10 Rules of Writing:
1.  Never open a book with weather.
2.  Avoid prologues.
3.  Never use a verb other than “said” to carry dialogue (he channeled S. King here).
4.  Never use an adverb to modify the verb “said.” (Adverbs are the mortal sins of writers). 
5.  Keep your exclamation points under control!!!!!
6.  Never use the words “suddenly” or “all hell broke loose.”
7.  Use regional dialect, patois, sparingly.
8.  Avoid detailed descriptions of characters (your reader does have an imagination).
9.  Don’t go into great detail describing places and things (see 8 above).
10.  Try to leave out the part(s) that readers tend to skip.

I won’t even try to add to these. 

In every class and seminar on writing mysteries and thrillers, Mr. Leonard’s style comes up. In reverent tones his use of the language (much he created himself) is demonstrated and discussed. Few achieve the level of sophisticated unsophistication he consistently achieved in his work. Read his books, study the lingo, understand the characters, immerse yourself in his worlds – then see your analyst.

 Chili Wants His Coat
From Get Shorty

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Wednesday, August 14, 2013

An Interesting Dilemma



After meeting with a number of potential agents about my new manuscript Wars Amongst Lovers I was surprised to learn, (after all their nice comments about the characters, story line, pacing and even story structure) that it is too long. Not just a little too long but maybe 60,000 to 70,000 words too long. Now I have recently bought a lot of books that are in this word count range and many are even longer (pick up any Follett or Cussler and you know what I mean). Their point was they are they and you are well, nobody. I of course answered, not yet!

The discussion of how long a book should is as old as the printed page. The simple answer is “as long as the story takes.” But the real answer is really a couple of answers. The first is, What is the market buying? – not what’s being offered but what’s selling. In our time of 140 character lives one might assume that shorter is better, given our short attention spans and universal ADHD. The second reason is economics, a three hundred page book versus a 500/600 page book – both story’s being equal. The market doesn’t accept a 50 percent increase in the price due to additional printing and shipping costs. In fact shipping can literally increase by more than 50% - bigger/thicker = more weight = more $$$$$. So unless you have a proven track record not many publishers will want to pick up that big first novel.

What to do? Well, not being unreasonable, I suggested instead of beating the thing up and cutting away 45% of the story (and to be honest it is already quite efficient) why not make the book into two books. It also gives me a good reason to do a trilogy. Expand the time frame and also expand the hero’s story.

It’s a fabulous historical fiction piece that begins before World War II and now can include the period from the late 1940s and into the early 1950s. So there you are, from one book comes three, all reasonable in length and doesn’t everyone just love sequels?

And regarding ebooks none of the above applies, page count is irrelevant. 

RE Sharon O’Mara: She’s still hard at work getting the bad guys. Kevin Bryan landed a job in London, and Basil, well he’s just lying in the sun waiting for his next bone. Story is slowly coming together, but no promises on publishing dates.

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Wednesday, August 7, 2013

What Drives Writing?



I stumbled on a few very good videos that concern writing and the future of publishing, take a few minutes and enjoy.

Stephen King – Where is writing headed?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0ELlianFnL0

Stephen King on e-books (remember this was three years ago)
 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IGsx-VJ3e8M

John Hodgman – How to make it as a writer - he was in the commercial - PC vs. Apple.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=tVUJIGqL1AA

John Irving – for aspiring writers
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AYvOSrgvCrk

An overview of 10 writing rules – whatever. This is so New Yorkish it makes your toes curl!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LLIGZEBmBUk

So there you are; all the answers in one place. To paraphrase the great baseball movie, Bull Durham:

You write the book, 
you sell the book, 
you read the book.

Here’s it is:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pLMl0CLIDLg

That’s it, ain’t the writer’s life easy!.

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Wednesday, July 31, 2013

Writers Conferences – 7 Things You Need to Do



Last weekend I spent three and one half delightful days at the Mystery Writers Conference at Book Passage in Corte Madera, California. This was the 20th conference for the store owners Bill and Elaine Petrocelli. It has a reputation for excellence in both guests and attendees, many have gone on to brilliant writing careers and take this opportunity to give back to other writers learning their chops. I recommend it to any mystery/thriller/suspense/detective scribbler out there.

The faculty this year included incredible Martin Cruz Smith, award winning Elizabeth George, D.P. Lyle, Kirk Russell, the delightful Isabel Allende, Cara Black (of Paris fame), Ivy Pochoda, Cornelia Read, Jacqueline Winspear, and of course the ringmaster of this circus, Sheldon Siegel. The list also included technical help from retired FBI agents, firearms experts, and literary agents. Intense, funny, fascinating, inspiring and even instructive, the days went by faster than a 9mm through Jell-O.

What did I learn? Here are seven tips for conferences:
1. Remember to bring a notebook. It needs to have a stiff back or clip it on a clipboard. Many of these conferences don’t have tables so your lap is your only option. Carry extra pens (I like gel types), pencils need sharpening so use pens. Post the date and who the players are at the session on the top of the page, good for later reference. A lot of attendees work directly on computers taking notes, for me this is too confusing and distracting (and complicated with cords and chargers and everything). Transcribe later.

2. Meet as many of the faculty as you can. Don’t get all pushy and try to impress them with your work. In fact don’t even show them anything. Ask questions, try to steal a little of their brain if you can. Watch how they act, someday you might be in their shoes, it’s always good to have a mentor.

3. Meet as many of the attendees as possible. Every one of them has a reason to be there. Some are working on their first book, others maybe their sixth or seventh. Be sincerely interested in what they are doing and they may even listen to what you’re writing about. Pass them a card, get theirs. They might be sitting next to you on stage at some future event.

4. Send thank you notes. Honestly didn’t your mother bring you up right? Send the organizers a note, send the MC a note, and if you have interviews with agents or other faculty send them a brief note as well (I also slip in a business card). A little civility is always appreciated. And I mean a note, handwritten with a stamp – not a Facebook posting or an email (if you can’t get their address I guess an email is marginally okay).

5. Arrive early, stay late; you never know who you might meet. As hard as it is, try to go to all events and discussions. It is a grind especially late on the third day and early Sunday morning. But there might be one nugget of help in your career and it was at the session you missed. You paid for the ride, now take it.

6. Ask questions. Every member of the faculty has been where you are now. They asked questions and learned. Squeeze them for the information, put a hot bright light on them, grill them, make them sweat – it’s good practice.

7. Summarize and store your notes. A few days after the conference pull out the notebook and transcribe your notes. Reorganize the odd string of thoughts you posted. Reflect and add more notes now that you have had time to think about the sessions (and save the old ones). This will help to imprint your brain with what you learned and remember to also go back in a few weeks and look at them again. Add these notes to your writer’s notebook for later reference.

8. Bonus - Buy books written by the authors at the session. There will always be new writers at these sessions, buy their work, read them, try and understand what they talked about and how they applied it to their work. In one session a very successful writer confessed that he liked a book so much he deconstructed it to understand how the author built the story – now that’s dedication to your art!

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